no don't remove it.

its good and works fine too.

why did you post such bad main photo( in my opinion) lol.

I think you got that bad because you used so much tags that doesn't work when using anime style generation

like [ score_7_up, score_6_up, score_5_up, score_4_up, score_9, score_8_up, score_7_up, source_extreme-realistic-detailed-photo, realistic, ultra-detailed, detailed lightning, 32k, UHD, life-like, extremely detailed, extreme details, hyper-detailed lightning, perfectly detailed, realistic photograph, bokeh, depth of field, Photo, Detailed, Refined, Intricate, Exact, Precise, Realistic, Splendid, Magnificent, Fine, raw, stunning, unparalleled, well-executed, outstanding, ziprealism, epiCPhoto, epiCRealism, DSLRQuality-Realism, BREAK, ] and random negative prompt

I won't post my generations but

I tried with pony v6 and pony styles and your lora worked very well