Seems to work OK (pic should be up in an hour, and with it 100 buzz towards onsite training if you wish to use that), but
1: Please list your tags in description or version details (the trigger words field). Had to work out them from your example pics which is unnecessary difficulty. Having your tags organized in a text document, (preferably in roughly order of head to toe) before you start labeling actually makes it easier for you during training (you can easily remove references things like shoes from a particular image if the camera is too high) as well as for everyone who will use your LoRA.
2: You don't need that many words for training clothes (or characters) in Illustrious (or any model). Just one per piece of clothing (so it has its own "physics" and interaction with verb/adjective tags instead of being a stiff monolithic blob)+one for any pattern/print (because those bleed into everything otherwise)+asymmetrical features (because even without flip augmentation Illustrious is bad at recognizing details are supposed to be asymmetric) is fine. You don't need to list what kind of outfit it is, or most details.
You can consult my clothing training tips, and/or my general training guide if you wish. Hope to see you make more LoRAs so I have more stuff to try out.